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Saturday, 6 July 2013

Travel, Travel and Travel



The path may be of sand, water or gravel..
All I do is travel, travel and travel..
Lost among the people that pass in hush and rush..
Having my morning coffee or may be being a lush
Thousands of faces that have plastic smiles..
Walk by my side for miles..
Although being besides me, they are lost in the world of their own..
And here I am still travelling and exploring all alone..
Playing with the strings, trying to play the correct note..
Following the path aimlessly, unaware where my thoughts float..
Having a faith that I have a beautiful paradise waiting at the end..
For it’s just the Bend,  and not the End..
Still in the search of a heart, that can make my thoughts unravel..
With the passing time, all I do is travel, travel and travel…!!

P.S.- This poem is written for 'That Tuesday Thingy-Premiere' of Indiblogeshwaris...!!

24 comments:

  1. Waah..!!
    Fabulous..:)

    Just love the way you rhyme..:)

    Extra credits for this line - "For it’s just the Bend, and not the End.."

    :) :)
    Keep it up.

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    1. Thank you so much Sobhan.. Person like u who creates magic with his own words appreciating me is really a honour for me.. thanks .. :) <3

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  2. shaandaaar :D awesome poem....

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  3. Hey it's a nice read..... And I thoroughly enjoyed it. I ve written a one by the title of Wandering Gypsy... I hope u cn notice the resemblance

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    1. thank u so much and u have written really well too.. It really feels nice to see one blogger appreciating other..I loved ur title- "Wandering gypsy".. :)

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  4. Agree...man is a traveller and will be moving till he breathes his last!

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    1. Thank u so much ruchira.. m glad u liked it... :D

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  5. A very nice thought and smoothly written! :)

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    1. Thank u rachit... U made my day with ur words..:)

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  6. Your words reminded me of another song - Main Jahan Rahoon from Namastey London. Very well done. True, the traveller in us is never satiated. Good luck for the contest.

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    1. Thank u so much ... M honored u liked it.. :)...

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  7. I love poems that rhyme and yours rhyme beautifully :)

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    1. Thank u so much pooja.. M glad u loved it.. :)

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  8. Wanderlust ... it is biting me now, after a long time. Your poem made me want to pack my bags and take off

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    1. haha ritu.. Pack ur bags and take away..and enjoy the trip.. U might have a paradise waiting.. :)... Thank u so much... M glad it touched you.. :)

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  9. The poem written is Fab... :)(y)
    I luvd it.. :)

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    1. Thank u so much tanya... :).. m glad u liked it... <3

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  10. Very well written. Travelling in search of a heart that unravels your thoughts. That's a nice ending.

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    1. Thank u so much shail... m glad u liked it.. I m honored. .. :)

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  11. It's just the bend and not the end...very well said.

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    1. Thank you janu... M glad u liked it.. U made my day with ur comment.. :)

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  12. lovely take on the prompt !

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    1. Thank u so much ruchira.. M really happy that u liked it.. U made my day...!! :)...

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Will be Happy to see ur lines for the same...!! Do scribble here..



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