The path may be of sand, water or gravel..
All I do is travel, travel and travel..
Lost among the people that pass in hush and rush..
Having my morning coffee or may be being a lush
Thousands of
faces that have plastic smiles..
Walk by my side for miles..
Although being besides me, they are lost in the world of their own..
And here I am still travelling and exploring all alone..
Playing with the strings, trying to play the correct note..
Following the path aimlessly, unaware where my thoughts float..
Having a
faith that I have a beautiful paradise waiting at the end..
For it’s
just the Bend, and not the End..
Still in the
search of a heart, that can make my thoughts unravel..
With the
passing time, all I do is travel, travel and travel…!!P.S.- This poem is written for 'That Tuesday Thingy-Premiere' of Indiblogeshwaris...!!
Waah..!!
ReplyDeleteFabulous..:)
Just love the way you rhyme..:)
Extra credits for this line - "For it’s just the Bend, and not the End.."
:) :)
Keep it up.
Thank you so much Sobhan.. Person like u who creates magic with his own words appreciating me is really a honour for me.. thanks .. :) <3
Deleteshaandaaar :D awesome poem....
ReplyDeleteThank u anshuma.. :D <3 ..
DeleteHey it's a nice read..... And I thoroughly enjoyed it. I ve written a one by the title of Wandering Gypsy... I hope u cn notice the resemblance
ReplyDeletethank u so much and u have written really well too.. It really feels nice to see one blogger appreciating other..I loved ur title- "Wandering gypsy".. :)
DeleteAgree...man is a traveller and will be moving till he breathes his last!
ReplyDeleteThank u so much ruchira.. m glad u liked it... :D
DeleteA very nice thought and smoothly written! :)
ReplyDeleteThank u rachit... U made my day with ur words..:)
DeleteYour words reminded me of another song - Main Jahan Rahoon from Namastey London. Very well done. True, the traveller in us is never satiated. Good luck for the contest.
ReplyDeleteThank u so much ... M honored u liked it.. :)...
DeleteI love poems that rhyme and yours rhyme beautifully :)
ReplyDeleteThank u so much pooja.. M glad u loved it.. :)
DeleteWanderlust ... it is biting me now, after a long time. Your poem made me want to pack my bags and take off
ReplyDeletehaha ritu.. Pack ur bags and take away..and enjoy the trip.. U might have a paradise waiting.. :)... Thank u so much... M glad it touched you.. :)
DeleteThe poem written is Fab... :)(y)
ReplyDeleteI luvd it.. :)
Thank u so much tanya... :).. m glad u liked it... <3
DeleteVery well written. Travelling in search of a heart that unravels your thoughts. That's a nice ending.
ReplyDeleteThank u so much shail... m glad u liked it.. I m honored. .. :)
DeleteIt's just the bend and not the end...very well said.
ReplyDeleteThank you janu... M glad u liked it.. U made my day with ur comment.. :)
Deletelovely take on the prompt !
ReplyDeleteThank u so much ruchira.. M really happy that u liked it.. U made my day...!! :)...
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