I kept swearing on the moon.. Night by Night..
No matter how hard i tried to keep it aflame...
I saw it dying one phase at a time every night...
Finally it sunk.. and the sky pulled over the black blanket..
Days passed.. and it again bloomed to a full shining ball from a crescent...
And that is when i felt my all promises are fulfilled... !!
Good work. :)
ReplyDeleteThank u sobhan.. Am glad u liked it..
DeleteMaybe I should look at the moon the way you do. Love the happy ending! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Irene.. Yup u must look at the moon like I do.. after a new moon .. there is always a full moon.. although not sooner but after 15 days eventually.. but it does come to remove the darkness and spread its light.. :) same is with life.. Keep Smiling... :)
DeleteWoah! :)
ReplyDeleteThank u Abhishek.. :)
DeleteShort and sweet li'l poem! :D
ReplyDeleteLoved it :)
Thank u so much Mauli.. <3
DeleteAs beautiful Poem as The Moon..
ReplyDeleteLuvd it... <3 <3 ♥☆:D :*
I am sure..u would love it Tanya. Now next time roza k time issi moon ko dekh ke todna.. lol.. :D...
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