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Monday, 23 September 2013

A Walk to Remember

Planning to Take a Stroll With a Loved One, This Weekend??



The Small Baby Steps by your Side..
At the Foggy Morning, where your Spark is the Guide..
The soft cool Breeze playing with our Tresses..
And our Foot prints on those paths, leaving Traces..
The Sweetly scented Mist wrapping Us Around..
The Chirping Birds always Surround..
The Flowers being Sad for not having touched your Feet..
The Craving of sun rays, Its You they want to Meet...
The Leaves falling down from the Maple Tree...
The bench awaiting for you to sit and set Your Spirits Free...
The path so awaited, the path so calm..
The Stroll I long for with my every morning Alarm.. 
My Head resting on your Shoulder, Our fingers Intervened..
A Morning I crave for, So Beautiful, So Serene
Before I get lost in the deepest Slumber..
Can I share with you A Walk to Remember..????


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13 comments:

  1. Arvind Passey23 September 2013 at 17:19

    "A Morning I crave for, So Beautiful, So Serene
    Before I get lost in the deepest Slumber.."

    Really, you need to pay heed to your morning alarm! :)

    Nice attempt!

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. Words N Me23 September 2013 at 22:41

      Thank u so very much sir.. am honored to hv a comment from u... u made my day...

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  2. Sobhan Pramanik23 September 2013 at 17:51

    Nice one. Keep it up.

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    1. Sobhan Pramanik23 September 2013 at 21:22

      Kavi koi kahani v suna diya karo..:) :) ^_^

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    2. Words N Me23 September 2013 at 22:42

      Thank u sobhan.. sure.. will try in the next post...

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  3. ansHU...23 September 2013 at 18:43

    awesome super like :D

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  4. Unknown23 September 2013 at 19:56

    this is the best among all of your poems! :)
    loved it!!

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    1. Words N Me23 September 2013 at 22:43

      Awwwww...!! Thank u so much mauli... am glad u liked it so much... <3

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  5. Anonymous25 September 2013 at 18:50

    What a nice thought! A stroll can make up a gloomy weekend..!!

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    1. Words N Me25 September 2013 at 22:19

      Thank u so much .. But may i know ur name pls??? am glad u liked it...

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  6. Tanya Kasbati25 September 2013 at 22:40

    Super duper like <3 <3
    Specially l lyk dis 1-The Chirping Birds always Surround..
    The Flowers being Sad for not having touched your Feet.
    Nd the 1st stanza 2.... Keep it up... (Y)
    Nd I wud luv 2 share a walk wid u 2 b remembered ! :) :* <3

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    1. Words N Me25 September 2013 at 22:55

      Thank you so much Tanya... Am glad u loved it.. <3.. We for sure will soon have a walk to remember.. :)

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Will be Happy to see ur lines for the same...!! Do scribble here..

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